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I agree but disagree with Fish’s claim. I agree the students
should learn their way with the language and grammar then manipulating it for the particular
subject it is needed. Language is beautiful thing it is what connects us with
every single person around us. Language is required in every single part of
schooling whether it be math, English, or even music they all have some kind of form of
communication in common. When trying to communicate in a scholarly manor there
are many things you do not want to happen.
Over the course of an eight-week period, I witnessed five
tutoring sessions at The Ohio State Newark Writer’s Studio. I found that with
watching these sessions I have many ideas to support Fish’s main clause. I feel
it is important people learn how to communicate in an educational manor however,
I disagree with the fact that it is not just that simple we need to try to
understand what people take away from our writing. Many people try to
communicate many things through writing. Although as I said they try, does not
always mean they successfully do so. Many
people can get the wrong idea when ideas are not explained thoroughly and
clearly.
In the midst of those eight weeks we were asked the question
repeatedly what we feel is most to college level writing, which is similar to
what Fish is talking about but not exactly. I discovered that language was the
most important thing to college level writing however it was not language exactly
it was what people could take away from the language itself. So I agree with
Fish’s statement that people need to learn to write the language but also we
need to be able to step on the other side in the readers shoes and think what
are people going to take away from the piece of writing being written.
Have you ever read something on Facebook or Twitter and someone misspells
every word and sounds very unintelligent or “stupid”? This is your perspective
of person and we acquire them quite quickly without even knowing people. People
can get a perspective of you as a writer and with the example I just mentioned
early maybe incompetent? When someone reads your paper you do not want them
thinking you are lazy because you did not what to correct misspelled words and
ill grammar. It is all about creating a perspective for you through the reader’s
eyes.
Overall, I agree to disagree. Fish is right students need to
learn sentence structure and grammar. At the same time we should teach students
to figure out what you want people to take away from the particular piece of writing
being written. With all these tools in mind, I feel students will be very
prepared for writing in college. If all these factors were taught could you
imagine what college essay would look like if students actually knew how to use
all the tools needed to make a well written essay.
"Language is beautiful..." "Language is required..." I love the repetition that you used in the beginning of these sentences. Believe it or not, you used a form of rhetoric and it was a pretty strong form at that. It was at this point I actually got drawn into your post and was forced to actually listen and understand the point you wanted to make (Not that I wasn't paying attention before haha). My advice to you is to continue to use rhetoric where you can in your future college papers; not only will it help you write very convincing argumentative papers, but your professors will love it as well. Good luck to you as you continue through your studies.
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