|What working together|
OK, I get that; I can see how writing can be viewed as logical relationships, all working together. I like to think of it like a multilevel staircase, the steps are each sentence, and each thought should lead to the next. Each paragraph can be viewed as each flight of stairs, all work together, and leading some where…
|Wouldn't want to climb without the rope|
before you can start building stairs, and unless your some sort of natural craftsman, or happen to build staircases it all the time, it can be hard. Some people are lacking the motivation needed build something so big, others simply don’t have the right tools, and some people think they are really good at building staircases, but I sure wouldn't want to use their stairs. Building stairs must be done right; you cant half ass it, being others may want to use your stairs someday.
|Why I do what I do,|
My worlds greatest little people
|Red or Blue|
|What college tradition has become |
Carmen V's Mirror Lake
Over the course of the sessions I observed, when the student who was being tutored chose to come prepared and willing to learn, it was enjoyable to watch them decode the text; but when he came to the sessions unprepared and not wanting to learn, it was such a waste of time. I am a very busy lady, who has a lot of other responsibility's, and all I could think as I watched the student and the writing consultant discussing video games, and other clueless thoughts was “I just rushed in the shower... and didn't shave my legs... to listen to this shit…”
Colleges need to cut the bull shit, and teach students they are attending college to become intellectuals,critical thinkers, and the leaders of our society, not to play childish games. The college curriculum can teach a higher level of thinking, but some students don’t realize they are there to become the leaders and critical thinkers. I know the first time I tried to get my degree I didn't understand this yet, and no one told me either. In order to make changes within our broken society, students need to learn that debating is good, being, listening to others is how we form our opinions: Arguing is just how humans discuss things with passion, and it can help to bring topics that legitimately need discusses to the minds of others.
|My Great Grandma|