Gulaid Hassan

Professor boczkowski

English 1109

4/17/2013

Fish Chronicles

           

        

    I think good essay needs more than a good sentence structure. After reading fishes opinion on a good essay, I really have to say that I don’t agree with everything that he said https://carmen.osu.edu/d2l/lms/content/viewer/view.d2l?tId=5447898&ou=10797129 , and after spending a lot of time a the writing studio, I had the opportunity to obtain a lot of information which made me revaluate how I assemble my essays from this point forward.  A good essay does not only need more than a good sentence structure, but it also needs to have a lot of points and those points need more than one way of emphasizing them. Some of the points include a good introduction, which needs to get the readers attention and become a good outline for the essay. The introduction needs to start with a good thesis that’s also going to lead you to the conclusion of the essay after reading it.

            The main reason why I believe a good essay needs more than a good sentence structure, is because an essay would not be considered a good sufficient essay without highlighting all the main points that you want to get across in the introduction of the essay. When I was at the writing studio I came across a student who is majoring in literature and she literarily changed my idea and prospective on a good essay, and her idea was, in the introduction of your essay. http://classweb.gmu.edu/WAC/philosophy/professors/sample_papers_introductions.htmlYou have to get your point across without really detailing and highlighting your story in only one paragraph, and on the course of your story you have to led your story connect and lead itself.

            When I was in the writing studio while I was doing my observation analysis, I learned a lot of beneficial ideas on how to write a good college essay http://newark.osu.edu/academics/degreesatnewark/english/thewritersstudio/Pages/index.aspx. A good college essay needs more than just a good sentence structure and most peoples idea of having good essay has to contain at least 5 paragraphs, first one being your introduction, then you needs at least 3 body paragraphs that highlight all of your points that were mentioned in the introduction. The 3 body paragraphs have to contain your ideas and quotations, and that has to lead to your conclusion and in the conclusion you have to let the reader know what lead you to finish the story in the conclusion.

            Everybody that I shadowed all had one thing in common which was an essay is complete with not only a good sentence structure but with also an idea driven from ones mind and quotes. A good essay cannot only contain ones opinion, it has to also have references that have a good lead. You cannot have a story based on only one person’s opinion; you have to make your readers know that you have other people that agree with you, and you have to show it in a format that lets the readers know the difference between your words and other people quotes in a format that does not confuse the reader.

            In conclusion, I do not believe a good essay needs a good sentence structure, but I also believe in all the points mentioned in the above introduction and the body paragraphs, fishes story makes logical points but I personally believe you cannot get your point across in an essay with only a good sentence structure. You need to have a topic for your story and a good thesis that can lead the reader to the conclusion.